A.O. Avalon

My body can't take the contortion Yet the stress does these things to me I thought I was normal or average I found out I'm a worthless nobody Firstly, cut ...

Linkin Park is very possibly my least favorite band ever. I'm liking Goldfinger alot right now... anybody know them?

yeah i don't like the "Children of..." line either, but i couldn't really come up with something else. any suggestions? eh yeah there's some definite cheese... guess that's just the ...

So I'm bending the rules, and writing a preface, but not about my poem, more about it's inspiration. If anyone (moderators) can tell me where a good place to put ...

I'm "better than most?" Thanks In! And thank you Klaus and Sam...and K, I'm two seconds from posting a new poem in Dramatic... so there's the more work you wanted ...

Dispense means "to release" as well, so it's technically okay, but i could probably come up with a better word. And yes, the word is meant to be used alot... ...

Go back and look Gala. You'll see why the nanny needs a name. (hint: think repition.) Here's what I've been wondering about: Why does no one think it's strange that ...

Mesh, You rock my world!! I feel the same way about grammar and poetry. I agree, dispense with the commas. Would be to lessen the beauty Of buds erupting from ...

. To a casual observer from afar, it would look like a shadowy dark construction on one side, but on the other a bright swelling market of colour and waking ...

This is fantastic... very funny and fun, and I LOVE the way you personify the days. The only thing that bugs me is that you don't seem to have a ...

Where are the next two chapters? *hunts*

You're also a jerk who conceals his identity!! I guess I could try reading your profile...but where's the fun in that? *curses Josh* I'm stealing your Ramen for this.

Hi and welcome! You should defineitely check out the boards, you'll find alot of good advice (especially concerning the pros and cons of passive voice :P) and if you don't ...

Deep beneath my house in the homeland, where the earth is dry and the sun hot. This isn't a complete sentence. As norris pointed out, this seems to be a ...

Well, that's why you have all your wonderful, proof-reading friends at YWS. _________ _____________ ______________ Picky stuff first: Councillor Armen was worried, for several, differing reasons. Just